Skullheads

Hi, I've got this song I wrote a few days ago, and I gotta ask you about two things: First of all, I don't know what to call it? I thought of 'Love me too', but the last song I wrote also had 'Love' in the title... I also had 'Can't help' in mind.
Secondly, in the second chorus i use the word 'blissing', like 'bliss'. Do you think that it can be used that way?


Go by, go by
you always seem to catch my eye
oh my, I try
but you just spread your wings and fly

New day, new day
this is the time and I’m ok
go say, say “hey”
your restless mind don’t ever seem to stay

Girl, I can’t help loving you
and, I can’t help missing you
oh, I can’t help wishing you
would love me too

I am, you are
how did I end up in your car?
Let's play the game
We burst into a roaring flame

Girl, I can’t help loving you
and, I can’t help missing you
oh, I can’t help blissing you
You love me too

Stillborn love, it's the very first song text I've ever written. What do you think?

Go into the shadowns, stay there for a while
Hide your thoughts with your secret smile
Now between us seem an everlasting mile
Oh, crying wild

In my latest hours the only thing I see
Is the love of us that will never be
Wipe away the tear on the face of me
Oh, darkening we

Life these days seem oh so rough
What will I do with my stillborn love
Help me, forces high above
Stillborn love

Cover me with courage that never ends
Hope into the Hell descends
Where did you go, my trusted friends
The world seems filled with evil fiends